Here is the first paragraph from an ESL student’s essay on the film The Kite Runner.
Kite Runner movie has been filmed in the 1980 and the story passed in 1988 about wealthy guy from Iran and his son in Afghanistan. Dad always complained about his son because, when he was in trouble, he has never [...]
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Here’s the first paragraph of an essay about current events from a student.
“All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others.” A quote there from George Orwell’s chilling novel Animal Farm expresses exactly the brand of two-facedness that gay marriage is approached with in this day and age. As most alarmingly shown [...]
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Here is another essay from an ESL student on education
Study is the most important thing in our life, we will always learn in the whole life. Everyone want to study more than what they get in the present. University where everyone wants to be in is the highest degree in education. In university, people can [...]
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Here are the first two paragraphs of an essay on education from an ESL student.
In my opinion, education should be free. There are a number of social and economic results for free education in many countries.
First of all, free education that means everyone can access school and library resort even if they are rich or [...]
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